fede’s totally unnecessary feedback lol
This map is pretty fun in terms of gameplay, nothing too simple and nothing too hard. My only complain is that if you go afk for atleast a second, the lava will get you when you press the first button. Before I start talking about other stuff, I wanna mention this over here -
This is just… tricky. It just doesn’t go well. I could’ve failed there if it was my first try! Who knows? You guys should put a warning that that will fall. It doesn’t go well.
Some platforms also feel too squarish. Maybe add some wedges in the corners?
The lava is also too fast for a Hard. Making 2 mistakes would make you drown before even getting to the next part.
Ok. Going to the next part.
This part isn’t too good. Try to shape the terrain so it isn’t blocky and the holes feel quite weird. The black color used for the floor doesn’t go too well, too.
The door feels… awkward? It could have improvement. I do like how the door closes after the lava rises. Like Phex (PhexoniaRBLX) said, there could be more decorations like grass blades, vines and others. The bushes look kinda weird imo. Try looking at Oriental Grove’s bushes and get inspired from them. Also, I really dislike the cave with acid. It just feels blockish and empty. You should add stuff such as crystals, and stuff that is in caves, I dunno lol.
2nd Last room is nice? Maybe you should add props from the first room such as the boxes, vents and others + what Phexonia requested. Something that you guys should fix in the last room is the abuse of helping-ladders.
This makes those platforms be useless if that’s there. If it was on purpose, ok then. But if it wasn’t, it should atleast appear after the next button. Also, if I’m sure you can press the last button by doing a wraparound.
The last room is a bit too hard. It doesn’t really match the difficulty too well. Could have some islands as deco on the sides, since the room is too spacious. The lava there is way TOO fast too. There’s also this which I want to mention;
You should fix those building errors Imo.
edit: You should also try to use some music before the OST, since the map feels boring without any music.
Gameplay - 5/10 - Fits with difficulty (Ok)
Details - 7/10 - Nice
– add vines there and there
– improve the bushes
– add icicles in the cave
– detail more rooms
– nerf the lava a bit
Sorry if this review isn’t too good It’s my first time doing one and I hope it was atleast a bit helpful . This map does have potential, so keep going!